This is my WATW story for this month. The picture I'm writing about, down here, can be shown in greater detail if you click it.
The door creaked open.
Seven year old boy Jacob stepped in the attic. It was dark
and dusty, full of cobwebs and spiders. No one came here in a long while. No one
wanted to. Things too valuable to be thrown out and yet too useless to be set
downstairs were put here, where they lay forgotten.
Yet Jacob loved this place.
He feels the magic that surrounds the place, all the
memories he had since he was a baby. It consoled him to be in this place ever
since his father disappeared. They used to spend nights here, where they talked
and laughed about everything.
He came here when he felt lonely, when there was no one
there for him. This place always has been here.
Efforts of trying to rid this place of dust have been long
gone, but Jacob didn’t mind. He cleared a space for himself and sat down,
watching the spiders climb around. He smiled. This is where he belonged.
He did not know when he had gotten up again, but when he
did, there was light shining through something covered with cloth. Thinking
that his mother might be behind it and looking for him with a flashlight, he
crawled over and took the cloth off.
He did not expect such a sight. It was not his mother, but
however a painting that glowed off from another place… another world. He
blinked. This was something that only happened in fairy tales. Apparently, it’s
true.
He crawled closer and tentatively put his hand on the
surface. To his astonishment, however, his hand went right through. Voices
whispered to him. But he was not afraid. He knew what to do.
He took a ball of string and wrapped one end to a post,
another to his body. He took the not-so-sharp sword his father made for him,
grabbed a backpack full of food and water, and dived right into the picture.
He glanced backwards. There was his attic all right, and his
string was still there. It’s like Alice in Wonderland. More like Jacob in
Wonderland. Anyway, better get going.
He walked and walked, trying to reach the city with the
mountains. He thought of his mom, who may be worried sick when he came back. He
thought of his dad, encouraging him to move on. That motivated him.
Soon he reached the city. It seemed to be carved out of
diamonds itself. It seemed majestic with its towering buildings and graceful
arches. It was paradise, Jacob thought.
He did not know how right he was. It was paradise. The
heavens opened the gates for him when he reached it, and he looked around wondrously.
He wanted to get his mom here. He wanted to live here, and have a happily ever
after.
Unexpectedly, he was pulled into a hug. Startled, he turned
around… only to have his father’s smiling face looking at him.
“I’m so proud of you, son… you reached here…”
“I missed you so, father…”
Jacob’s father took him to where he lived. Outside there
were smiling children playing happily and asking if Jacob could join them.
Jacob’s father politely refused and stated that he may be able to next time.
When he was inside, Jacob was struck with how similar the
house is to the one he just came from. His father noted this and nodded.
“Your mom may find her own way here, Jacob. You can’t go
back. It’s paradise. I thought we could, but I was wrong.”
Jacob ignored that. “I will lead her here,” he said
tenaciously, “I will show her the way to the attic and to this.”
Jacob’s father shook his head sadly. “She won’t see the
light from the picture. It is not her time.”
“Does that mean… I’m dead? And I have to wait for my mother
to come here? She’ll think I’ve disappeared like you?”
Jacob’s father tried to choose his words carefully. But none
came out.
Jacob stood up. “There’s no way I’m leaving her, dad. I will
come back here, somehow.”
His dad smiled at him. “You aren’t the first to say that,
and won’t be the last. Everyone said that, and still they can’t go.”
Jacob was still determined. “I will go; I will get back.
Nothing can stop me.”
His father sighed. “I’ve raised a boy to become so
determined. You’re like your mother. All right, give it a try.”
Jacob’s face split into a smile. “I will be back, dad. I
promise.”
With that he departed. He found his ways through the streets.
The gates can’t open for him because it can’t let anyone out. But he was small
enough to wedge through a hole and set off on his way.
He went back on the path and walked on and on, but he never
found the portrait. It was at the end of the path that he stopped. What did his
dad say to him so long ago?
You may not see your dreams, because they’re so small they’re
nothing more than a tiny speck of dust. But it is so powerful it can create a
new universe. Like God created the point that caused the Big Bang. Don’t worry;
destiny is a string that will lead you there as long as you walk.
He stopped. His dream was to find his mother and take her
here. It was so small. Destiny is a string that will lead you there.
The yarn.
He looked for it on his body, and it sure was there. It was
just… small and almost invisible. It was the string of destiny.
He followed it and found where it was. The portrait was
there all right, just so small. He stretched it until it was big enough to
climb through.
He stumbled back into his attic, and he imagined his dad’s
smile. He did not take the yarn off the portrait for fear that he might not be
able to enter the place again. It turned out his mom just got home and was calling
for him.
He woke up. The painting didn’t glow and it was still
covered with cloth, and the ball of yarn was just where it was. It had all been
a dream. But it didn’t matter, because it was a great dream. Now he had two
choices- to go to sleep again and continue the dream, or to get up and chase
it.
He got up.
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That's it... 1,077! May the Force be with you!

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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DeleteA very creative story!!! The picture is quite inspirational as well! :)
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Thanks! :D
DeleteAwesome Story! I loved it! <3 I just posted mine. And thanks for chsing the picture!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'll read it right now! And you're welcome! :D
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